2022年英语二满分作文

  1. 2016年,饼状图,大学生旅游目的调查2019年,柱状图,大学生毕业去向统计2020年,饼状图,大学生手机阅读目的调查社会生活与发展类2014年,柱状图,我国城镇和农村人口变化2021年,柱状图,某城市居民锻炼方式调查职场发展类2012年,表格,某公司员工工作满意度调查三、题目要求(以2014年真题为例)Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)段落名称内容说明Para 1数据段描述图表数据,动态数据图描述数据上升下降,静态数据图描述数据所占比例难度不大,但却容易失手,比拼的不是你的英文水平,而是对短语句型的熟练度。写好数据段=熟练度+细心Para 2原因段分析原因,动态数据图分析为什么描述对象呈现如此变化,静态数据句重点分析哪个饼块占比最大,这是为什么难度最大,可以决定大作文的分数,即便背诵过模板也未必能得高分。原因:模板套用生硬、尴尬;自己填充的内容语言质量低。痛点:想不出理由;想到了写不出来
    3评论段给出评论,你是如何看待这一调查结果的?对此有何评论?可以先点评数据,然后展望未来难度最小,可以直接背诵模板,往里填词,套内容四、数据段(动)精讲(以2014年真题为例)Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)1.审题要点⚫先看横轴时间确定时态⚫再看纵轴数字加单位⚫三看图表标题和图示2.高分范文这张柱状图生动展现了1990到2010年之间我国城市和农村人口数量的显著变化。如图所示,城市人口数量从300百万大幅增长到666百万。相比之下,农村居民数量从834百万快速下降到674百万。The bar chart vividly shows some remarkable changes with regard to the number of urban andruralresidentsinChinabetween1990and2010.Itisclearthattheurbanpopulationrosesubstantially from 300 million to 666 million. By contrast, the number of rural residents witnessed adownward trend over these years, declining from 834 million to 674 million.
    4.表达素材1)介绍图表内容The _图表类型_vividly showssome remarkable changes with regard to _描述对象_ + _in China /in a specific city / at a specific college_ + between _时间_ and _时间_.2)如图所示It is clear that… = It is noticeable that… = We can see from the chart that… = As is shown in thechart, … = As can be seen from the chart, …3)两个描述对象之间的过渡相比之下:By contrast与此同时:Meanwhile有趣的是:Interestingly不足为奇:Not surprisingly4)描述数据变化句型一:只写变化,描述对象当主语_描述对象_ increased / decreased+ substantially / smoothly+ from _起点数字_ to _终点数字_.句型二:写幅度+变化,描述对象当主语_描述对象_ witnessed an upward / a downwardtrend over these years, rising / declining from _起点数字_to _终点数字_.句型三:用there be句型,描述对象放句中There was asubstantial / smooth+ rise / decreasein _描述对象_ from _起点数字_ to _终点数字_.句型四:用一句话串连两个变化例句:国际学生的比例在2015年迅速增长到30%,随后,在2020年平稳下降到25%。写法1:The proportion of international students rose substantiallyto 30% in 2015 before decliningsmoothlyto 25% in 2020.写法2:After rising substantiallyto 30% in 2015, the proportion of international students declinedsmoothlyto 25% in 2020.句型五:描述将来的变化例句:据预测,国际学生的比例将从2020年的10%平稳增长到2030年的15%。

    5The proportion of international students is estimated torise smoothly from 10% in 2020 to 15% in2030.五、数据段(静)精讲(以2018年真题为例)Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)1.审题要点⚫先看标题时间确定时态⚫再看最大比例和图示⚫三看紧随其后比例和图示2.高分范文这张饼状图生动比较了消费者选择餐厅的时候所考虑的五个因素。我们可以看到特色占据了最大比例,为36.3%。紧随其后的是服务质量、环境、价格和其他,分别占据了26.8%,23.8%,8.4%和4.7%。The pie chart vividly shows five factors that consumers will take into consideration when 6theychoose a restaurant. At 36.3%, we can see that specialty food takes the lion’s share. It is followed bythe service quality, the environment, the price and other factors, constituting 26.8%, 23.8%, 8.4%and 4.7% respectively.6第二节、第三节:好用的大作文万能理由学习要点:✓原因段(Para 2.)三大要素✓怎样快速想理由(cheese原则)✓五大万能理由和替换素材一、原因段三大要素:主题句、分论点、加序词主题句a:是什么因素促成了这一调查结果呢?在我看来,以下因素值得一提。What contributes to the survey result? From my perspective, the following factors deserve carefulconsideration.主题句b:一些导致这一调查结果的可能因素可以被总结如下。Some possible factors contributing to the survey result can be summarized as follows.主题句c:这个现象的背后有很多促成因素,但是以下几个值得一提。There are many contributing factors behind this phenomenon, but in my view, the following onesare worth particularly mentioning.主题句d:这个调查结果的原因可以被总结如下。Reasons for the survey result can be summarized as follows.二、通过cheese原则快速想理由1.为什么很多人做这件事=因为做这件事有好处、有价值2.常提到的好处和价值总共有12个,从中选出2-3个即可3.通过cheese原则快速记忆12个价值三、五大万能理由及其拓展1.万能理由一:非凡进步概要:写3句话,背景句—事实句—结论句,以中国人民在某事物的追求上取得非凡进步为背景,进而引出图表事实,最后得出结论(好处)。范文:2014年,我国城市和农村人口数量变化首先,这是一个公认的事实:我国农村居民在物质生活的追求上取得了巨大进步。于是,越来越多的人愿意搬到大城市,特别是考虑到他们或许可以在城里找到一份好工作。Firstly, it is a well-established fact that Chinese rural residents have made extraordinary progress inpursuit of material life. Therefore, an increasing number of them would like to migrate to largecities, especially considering that they might seek decent employment in the city.模板提炼:         7万能理由二:十分渴望概要:以中国人民十分渴望某事物为背景,进而引出图表事实,最后得出结论。范文:2014年,我国城市和农村人口数量变化其次,我们绝不能忽视一个事实:如今的农村居民渴望在生活水平上有进一步的提高。于是,搬迁到大城市备受追捧,这或许包含一个普遍的认知:都市生活给他们带来极大的便利。Secondly, under no circumstances can we deny the fact that rural population aspire to have furtherimprovement in their living standard. Thus, moving into big cities has gained great popularity,which may involve a general recognition that urban life can bring immense convenience to them.模板提炼:3.万能理由三:态度转变概要:以中国社会高速发展,中国人民的消费观念、思想意识或对某事物的态度发生巨大转变为背景,进而引出图表事实,最后得出结论。范文:2018年,消费者选择餐厅的因素首先,随着中国社会的高速发展,我国消费者的消费观念(或对外出就餐的态度)发生了巨大转变。证明这一点的最佳事实是:餐厅的特色和服务被给予了高度关注,这直接或间接表明:消费者希望有更好的就餐体验。Firstly, with the rapid development of society, consumers’attitude toward eating out is experiencingatremendous change. This point can be best illustrated by closer attention to features and theservice quality of a restaurant, which directly or indirectly indicates that they hope for better diningexperience.模板提炼:

  2. .万能理由四:政府支持概要:以政府/商家/高校等的大力支持来解释为什么出现这个现象。范文:2011年,国内汽车品牌的市场份额第二,这个现象背后的另外一个促成因素在于政府的大力支持。这或多或少解释了为何人们愿意购买国产汽车,特别是考虑到政府已经制订了一系列优惠政策和激励措施。Secondly, another driving factor behind this phenomenon lies in the substantial support of thegovernment. That more or less explains why people are willing to drive homemade vehicles,especially in consideration of a series of favorable policies and incentives implemented by thegovernment.模板提炼:5.万能理由五:压力山大概要:以人们在学习或生活上忍受巨大压力为背景,进而引出图表事实,最后得出结论。范文:2013年,大学生兼职情况调查第二,的确,如今的大学生不得不面对巨大的就业压力。于是,做兼职成为了他们在业余时间的首选,这源自于一种大众理念:他们可以在毕业前获得工作经验。Secondly, it is true that college students of today have no choice but to suffer from enormousemployment stress. As a result, doing a part-time job has become their first choice during spare time,which may result from a popular belief that they can get work experience before graduation.模板提炼:
  3. 9四、评论段写法写法一:点评数据+做预测写法二:点评数据+提建议范文:2011年,国内汽车品牌的市场份额(用写法一)总的来说,在经过详细分析后,我们可以发现汽车品牌市场份额的相关数据在图中得以很好地组织并呈现。在我看来,国产车的市场份额在接下来几年中会继续保持上升态势。Overall, after carefully analysis, we can find that data regarding market shares of auto brands hasbeen well-organized and well-presented in the chart. As far as I can see, the market share of Chinesebrands is expected to keep a rising trend over the next few years.范文:2018年,消费者选择餐厅的因素(用写法一)总的来说,在经过详细分析后,我们可以发现消费者选择餐厅的因素的相关数据在图中得以很好地组织并呈现。在我看来,特色和服务质量在接下来几年中会被给予越来越多的关注。Overall, after carefully analysis, we can find that data regarding how people select restaurants hasbeen well-organized and well-presented in the chart. As far as I can see, features and the servicequality is expected to be given more and more attention over the next few years.范文:2018年,消费者选择餐厅的因素(用写法二)总的来说,在经过详细分析后,我们可以发现消费者选择餐厅的因素的相关数据在图中得以很好地组织并呈现。在我看来,我建议餐馆应该各方面进一步完善自己,满足不同消费者的需求。….第一句略….As far as I can see, restaurants are strongly recommended to improve themselves ineach aspect to meet different needs of consumers.提建议时的常用表达:满足消费者的需要meet the needs of consumers反映了社会经济健康繁荣的发展reflect prosperous and healthy development of social economy平衡好学习和工作balance between study and work理性消费,避免浪费shop rationally and avoid waste成为复合型人才become well-rounded people
  4. 10跟上时代的步伐keep pace with modern times五、范文赏析1.2020年真题Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1)interpret the chart,and2)give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)高分范文:The pie chart vividly compares different purposes of reading on mobile phones among collegestudents. At 59.5%, we can see that acquiring knowledge takes the lion’s share. The next three itemsarekillingtime,gettinginformationandotherpurposes,representing21.3%,17% and 2.2%respectively.What contributes to the survey result? From my perspective, the following factors deservecareful consideration. Firstly, it is a well-establishedfact that mobile information technology hasachieved great development outcomes. Therefore, studying through mobile reading has gainedmuch popularityamong college students, especially considering that theycan study more efficiently.Secondly, today’s young people aspire to satisfy their ever-increasing intellectual and cultural needs.Therefore, an increasing number of college students wouldlike to kill time by reading novelsandnewsfromthemobile phone, which may involve a general recognition that itcan enrich their sparetime.All in all, so crystal-clear is the chart that almost everyone can figure out what it presents to us.Meanwhile, it is conceivable that mobile readingwill benefit the youth from different perspectives.学习知识,59.50%消磨时间,21.30%获取信息,17%其他, 2.20%某高校学生使用手机阅读情况学习知识消磨时间获取信息其他

    11(179 words)精彩译文:这个饼图生动地对比了大学生使用手机阅读的不同目的。我们可以看到获取知识占了最大的份额,约占59.5%。其次是消磨时间、获取信息和其他目的,分别占21.3%、17%和2.2%。是什么促成了调查结果?在我看来,以下因素值得仔细考虑。第一,这是一个公认的事实,移动信息技术在近些年取得了长足的发展。于是,通过手机获得知识在大学生群体中备受追捧,考虑到这能提高大学生的学习效率。第二,如今的年轻人渴望满足自己日益增长的文化需求。于是,越来越多的大学生通过在手机上看小说或新闻来消磨时间,这或许包含一个普遍的认知:这能充实他们的业余时间。总而言之,这张图是如此的清晰,以至于几乎人人都能明白它想向我们传递什么。同时,可以预见的是,手机阅读将会让青年人从各个层面上受益。2.2021年真题Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1)interpret the chart,and2)give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)高分范文:The bar chart vividly compares how citizens choose to do exercise. At 54.3%, we can see thatsolo exercise takes the lion’s share, followed by the category of exercising with friends, with familymembers, and taking part in group activities, constituting 47.7%, 23.9%, and 15.8% respectively.54.30%47.70%23.90%15.80%0.00%10.00%20.00%30.00%40.00%50.00%60.00%独自锻炼和朋友一起和家人一起团体活动某城市居民锻炼方式调查

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